Wow, i love it. I can just picture u looking out ur window and these things happening as fast as they did ion the poem, lol.

OMG! I remember doing a poem almost identacal to this one in 3rd grade! That is so weird. Really good.

Very well done and I liked your words and the thoughts you painted with them. fall is almost here and I am enjoying the thought of that. Not a bad time of the year.