This a good poem, not execellent as it is nothing really all that different in its theme/content. However, what takes it out of the fair/average territory is the poet has mastered the means to make a poet-poem-receiver connection. It reaches out in a way that the experiencer of it doesn't feel like an outsider, voyuer, but a "friend" receiving the message...and, isn't that what really good poetry is all about!

Well written... Good work!

Nice peice of work.!!!
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Really good.
I hate people who tell you, you don't know anything about hard times, when they are the ones that are uneducated.
Keep it up :)
5/5

Wow this poem wass just as goos as the other one i commented. vvery thought out and deep. again filled with emotion. you poured out your feelings, and said what on your mind and heart and that's all that matters.

Finally I've had enough
As i sit against the wall
Don't tell me I'm not tough
I've been through it all.

I loved that stanza the most. it was a great ending. wonderful words you wrote. a brillant write all and all. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Great job!! i really like it!