Anonymous

by Chelsea   Aug 23, 2008


There is this boy who makes my heart beat
50 times faster every time he looks at me
He makes me smile
He makes me laugh
He makes me mad
He makes me sad
I bet you're wondering
What's so great about him
He seems like your average teenage boy crush for the school year
To tell you the truth I don't even know
Why my emotions for him are holding me
Against the door
He has a hold on my heart
So tight I can't breathe
I can't help but wonder if he feels the same for me
Is it love...oh no
That is something that I don't know
Is it lust...oh yes
His spirit feels my soul
I aim for his energy to keep my mind under control
Is it like...I think you know
My heart still beats for him even after I go home
I bet you want to know who he is
His name is anonymous
And he's here in my heart

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  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    It's good, if I may say. You have a lot of potential! Some lines didn't fit as well, particually the longer ones, but it is overall a poem that gets the message across. Isn't that the most important thing?

  • 16 years ago

    by Yeka

    Love it but more the flow
    but a little bit descriptions k
    but love it great job (^_^) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    It feels like it's missing something. Like it's missing a bit of emotion. Don't get me wrong, it's still an awesome poem and I enjoyed reading it. I just wish it had a little more description. I had a hard time catching it in my mind. I'd get a glance at the feeling behind it, but then just as fast as it came it would be gone.
    Good write though!
    -Mo-

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