When I lost you

by DarkCrystalbtrfy   Aug 23, 2008


On that day so long ago
When I lost you I forgot the world
It became grey and dull
Like a knife that wont cut
Anger seeped into my heart
Going so deep it ripped me apart
My tears were shead and gone to soon
But in my heart I will still morn for you

When I lost you I forgot the world
It became meaningless empty
No happyness left
I screamed untill I could scream no more
Than death opened its door
Pulling you in for forever more
My heart was shattered like broken glass
The day you left me, the day you breathed your last

When I lost you I forgot the world
It became shallow unreal
Instability possessing my bones
Like just another step could overthrow
The walls around my heart
That seem to grow
With each day that passes by
When I lost you I forgot the world

Im sorry...

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  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    WOW!! i love it! its so powerful!

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    I definitley know how this feels, great job, brought back some tears and memories.

    5/5 :]

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxemzxXx

    Hey i really love this poem its great its full of sorrow and possesses a lot of emotion and is worded to perfection 5/5 keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    It became meaningless empty
    .. I think you're missing words or punctuation . This poem was filled with emotion . So sad .. Easy to relate to . 5/5

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