Really good

The subject and ur description were so deep and fantastic...In fact,I'm interested in such dark stuff and Hell...

You belong to me for eternity now
I look up to the evil lord and I give him a bow
I know now, my life is forfeit
He owns my soul, I am dead, Oh Shit!

This stanza is so expressive...
Great write..Loved it
Keep up the good work:)

I absolutely adored your word usage. You have really got a talent for the darker or sad poems. As I have said before I think it's because you really unleash your emotions. I think the nice little tie in at the end gave it a more personal touch and was a little humorous. I am sure that is what most of us would say.

Take Care,
Kay