The Temptress

by rhend   Aug 24, 2008


Your smile that is stuck to my memory
neither can't fade or erase by somebody
just as your eyes purport" Definition of harmony "
who am i not 2 genuflect unto your majesty?

your beauty that Sparks of its uniqueness
entice our senses so helpless
a beauty that command our heart to beat
rapidly as it turns into insanity.

Lovelier than a rose
resemble of a lotus
" the temptress" it is got to be
fitted for your personality

that is the reason why they fall
for your charm forevermore
and the reason why your popularity
in their desire goes on.

against the wind i offer to you
this pieces i made that you inspired me to do
if all this praise aren't enough for you
don't worry fair ladyangels will make it through.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Singmehome

    Awesome poem!! very descriptive...and very good written ....definete fav. :) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by PassionCourageTriumph

    Amazing. You are great with words and I enjoyed reading this poem.
    Keep writing!!!
    ~Kayla!

  • 16 years ago

    by Frozen hearT

    Great poem man.......

    (your beauty that Sparks of its uniqueness
    entice our senses so helpless
    a beauty that command our heart to beat
    rapidly as it turns into insanity.)

    this lines really touch me..... a good write frm u..
    i'll give it 5/5 for tis poem... =)

    i'll read more of ur poem soon...

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    One of the best love poems ive ver read..Very descriptive your words are beyond amazing..YOur admiration for that person was shown here perfectly..Flows perfectly..Amazing piece..No doubt about it..