One of the best love poems ive ver read..Very descriptive your words are beyond amazing..YOur admiration for that person was shown here perfectly..Flows perfectly..Amazing piece..No doubt about it..

Great poem man.......

(your beauty that Sparks of its uniqueness
entice our senses so helpless
a beauty that command our heart to beat
rapidly as it turns into insanity.)

this lines really touch me..... a good write frm u..
i'll give it 5/5 for tis poem... =)

i'll read more of ur poem soon...

Amazing. You are great with words and I enjoyed reading this poem.
Keep writing!!!
~Kayla!

Awesome poem!! very descriptive...and very good written ....definete fav. :) 5/5