Average and wonderful

by Kyle Cavanagh   Aug 24, 2008


Standard cubic room,
high square windows,
one small bed,
nothing particular glows.

solid wooden door,
solid wooden floor,
all slightly boring,
average nothing more.

maybe a poster,
maybe a lamp,
not to impressive,
curtains up and clamped.

not to different,
could just blend in,
some-one has entered,
the one who has a grin.

just an average patron,
of this average room,
mood matches the wall,
full of dark and gloom.

but the room starts to brighten,
the walls all start to fall,
revealing more colour,
music starts to sound.

what you always wanted,
was sitting right hear,
old and average room,
has become but slight more clear.

the room is nice,
and people have gathered,
but more abundant,
this is what you would have rather'ed.

the Grey paint is gone,
incomes more light,
you did all this,
you made the world more bright.

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  • 16 years ago

    by michelle

    Oh make sure when ur writing poems ur putting the right word in like hear is suppose to be here ok i hope that didnt hurt u any just trying to help

  • 16 years ago

    by michelle

    Oh make sure when ur writing poems ur putting the right word in like hear is suppose to be here ok i hope that didnt hurt u any just trying to help

  • 16 years ago

    by Mummy to a beautiful baby girl

    Loved it. i hate u kyle!!! ur 2 gud> =P keep writting cuz if u dnt i will need 2 hunt u dwn!!! lolz

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    An absolutely beautiful poem that has such a deep meaning. You really made me smile with this write!

    "maybe a poster,
    maybe a lamp,
    not to impressive,
    curtains up and clamped."

    Simple but good rhyming here, and I could seriously see this in my mind.

    "the Grey paint is gone,
    incomes more light,
    you did all this,
    you made the world more bright."

    Great ending, left me wanting more! Keep writing, always and forever....

  • 16 years ago

    by Sai

    I liked it a lot, it's cool

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