Comments : This Night..

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Hey rob very well written and a poetic poem too, One suggestion though you lost the rhyme slightly in the third Stanza,if you like you might use this , or not its up to you. Its a good poem either way

    The blackness beckons
    and the void commands sacrifice
    Forever I'm destined to reside
    in these deserted lands of respite

    Grant