That is really good!!! keep up the awesome work! 5/5

I was reading and fell inlove with this line:
"She is my forever,
and ever... and ever... and ever."
its not the best poem but it's good reading.
keep writing.

Aww, this is beautiful
i love the emotion, and love
it just glows off the page
really heartfelt
if you haven't shown her this, then you should :)
all the best!

She is my forever and ever and ever... haha i loved that. :) great rhythm.. very sweet. you're great with words and i love the concepts..sounds like true love, justin.
5/5

Sounds like love, no way to hide it... It was very nice and sweet, It would have made a nice quote, But I think it works best as a poem almost...