It was straight and to the point and the only thing I can critisize is it would have been better with a little more detail and maybe if it was a little longer but you're the poet and you know your own work. but you have a gift and I loved it

See even ashley sees your talent. this poem
made me think how i feel like I'VE become
a monster myself. cocaine has def. change me
and I REALLY miss <ME> I don't use it anymore
but i still feel like i lost something with my wife
and daugters and i'm fighting this monster inside me everyday. thanks putting this excellent poem
up.