This is very sad. Lesthat will always remain a part of me too, for he touched all our lives in a way that I don't think any of us can forget for the rest of our lives. He was a great guy. This poem gave me the goosebumps, and made me cry. It always sucks when you lose someone so close to your heart. Hugs* Hang in there. <3

Sounds like he was a great example of love and much more to many people... God be with his family and freinds in this time... and above all, let God use this circumstance to draw whoever was behind the wheel of that car closer to God... i certainly hope that this wont end up being just another mistake in that persons life.

Jenny, that was great. I'm not just saying that cuz it's about Lest. It really was, it captured all our emotions when he died. I didn't know him well but i still cried and thought he was way too young. The flow was solid, adn the meaning was evident and excellent. (5/5)

Beautiful!
I have tears in my eyes, just READING it... I am soo sad now =]

Well done.. im not even going to bother critising this one, because it is just too beautiful to do so.

Well done, definately voting a 5/5 -- eventhough Im sure its the thought that counts, not the votes.

Well done, beautifully created.

Loved every minute. =]

Keep up the fantastic work. =]

I hope your friend rests in peace =]

xx

Nic

xx

My prayers and thoughts are with you and his family. i can relate to this situation in many ways. but you can count on the fact that he's in a much better place than anyone else. though he will be missed. keep strong.
a heartfelt, beautiful write.
take care

liz

He sounded like he was having a rough life.. I could see this being read at his funeral ,did you?
Anyway it has really good flow, Im sure you had alot of emotions but you didnt make it sound like you were gunna kill yourself because of it. I liked it I've always like A B A B ryhme schemes so High Five!^ and im sorry about it.Im sure all 318 others of yours are just this good or better

This is so sad. I cried. I'm so sorry about your friend. I can't imagine how much that must hurt to lose someone who means so much to you. I'm sure he would've appreciated this poem though, it was very sad but beautifully written. 5/5

Very sad:( it was good.

WOW!
What a rip!! I bet the mom is just catatonic after losing both of them.
Master dedication, nice job.

Awww...
sorry for the loss.
but good poem....it shows u cared about him a lot

Awww...
sorry for the loss.
but good poem....it shows u cared about him a lot

Awww...
sorry for the loss.
but good poem....it shows u cared about him a lot