by X destini failed me X Aug 24, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You look at me with love; |
by Em
Such a heartfelt and powerful piece with lots of emotion and true feelings. Very unique, it's hoorible when the person you love just can't seem to love you back. Well written, 5/5. Em |
Beautiful. Really liked the different way this was written, switching between people, that really helped to show the level of betrayal and pain that you were expressing. I thought this a great poem, very well written, a tragic and heart wrenching piece. |
by LadyLk
WOOOOOOOOOOW |