WOOOOOOOOOOW

I loved it.. I don't understand how anyone else that has read this did not comment or rate. That's just crazy.. This is gonna be added in my favourite poems.. It was so nice to read.. Touching!

Beautiful. Really liked the different way this was written, switching between people, that really helped to show the level of betrayal and pain that you were expressing. I thought this a great poem, very well written, a tragic and heart wrenching piece.

Such a heartfelt and powerful piece with lots of emotion and true feelings. Very unique, it's hoorible when the person you love just can't seem to love you back. Well written, 5/5. Em