This poet is more of a "Bard" of old with the storytelling ability to hold the work's receiver, considering this is experienced in "print" only
makes it an even more impressive work of a ages old craft...I would love to hear it presented orally...Nicely executed ending!

I would say that this is something of an epic poem,, it sounds liek it has been passed down through the ages and now that it has come to you its your duty to now pass it on to this generation, very nice piece ! do u have any more poems like this?