Commitment of love

by Scorpio   Aug 24, 2008


My love,
I know that lately I made you feel bad & so down.....
So I gathered my self and I wrote what I wrote
I want you to believe once again that our love is real and a living thing..

Sweetie pie,
I wish that these words can draw back the smile in your face...
Cause only when you smile I can feel happy and the life will run into me again

My love believe me I meant each word down there
And if I can choose better words be sure that I'll put it down there

Because you deserve to have the greatest love ever :
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Whenever the dark will spread all the way
Our love will rise and spread the light here and there
Until it'll reach to the end of nowhere
For you my love I will always be there
We sacrificed a lot only for the loves sake
So we can always be together and forever
Our love is stronger than any armor or any sword
It will protect us against all demons any sort
I love you as much as the water in the sea
I love you as much as the sand in the desert
I love you as much as the stars in the sky
I love you is the only thing each cell in me is trying to say
The relation between us is too real to say fake
Loving you is the promise that I'll never break
With every second our love grows within me
Just believe in me & give a chance
For me to let you touch each feeling of our love inside me
I swear I'll never ever leave you alone
I swear I'll never ever let you down
I swear by your life and who create the earth & the sky
that I'll never stop loving you till the time reach for me to die..
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I love you sweetie with all my senses..

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Wow! Wow!! And Wow Again..xDD
    How did you write it that beautifully?
    I love it baby…xDD

    That was really so sweeeettttt, pouring out whatz in your heart…The emotions were so strong..People tend to always ruin love and a chance to happiness and im glad you have found your way back..You did it baby very wonderfully..Ryhmes and flow might not be considered in this piece yet I can proudly say this is one of a kind..Knowin you it must be really tough you had just to come up with this piece. Nevertheless I am so proud of you..lol..i told you u’’ll eventually become a poet too..hahaha..although I knew it from the start..anyways..keep it coming..Extremely job well done…I love you sweetheart..muahzzz..

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