Beautifully wonderful. It's always hard to lose someone you care about. But if that person were reading this poem today. I'm sure they would be very proud. Brought tears to my eyes, it was so amazing. Nothing wrong with it. Nothing wrong at all.

5/5

Aw. This is so sad. I've noticed a lot of people writing poems dedicated to him, and they all make me sad. It's a shame when someone so young loses their life, isn't it? I think you did a wonderful job on this poem, and I think that if he could read it, he would absolutely love it.

Five out of five. [5/5]

``Briana