I'm so sorry amber, i'm here for you... we'll make it through this, promise.

5/5..

great poem, amazing ryme, no flaws here.

Can't understand.. y there r always goodbyes to goodthings... just like a fullstop... just like death.... just like the hidden truth... Gudbyz.. They come after all..

Anyways nicely written.. wanted to compliment..... Keep sharing your poems....

I like the ending but the beggining is confusing unless u read it a few times(id work on that)
otherwise its ok
i like the fact its so real

Nice, i really liked your poem. keep up the good work. ^_^