I Care

by Simply Josh   Aug 25, 2008


To know you feel insecure
Makes me worry; what's wrong?
To know it's my doing is heart breaking.
Like a rejection that would prolong.

It's like we've lost all connection
And I can't even bear to look at you.
But I have nothing to defend myself against.
What did I do?

My intentions are pure
And I guess I'm caring
But to know it makes you feel uncomfortable
Is simply overbearing.

It's as if we're not friends
And a hug a harmful touch
Knowing and feeling this
Is all too much.

Do I intimidate you?
Do you feel like a prey?
Do I scare you?
Then why didn't you say?

Instead of having someone else
Deliver such news
Because I feel like a predator
And you a victim of abuse.

So I'm sorry if you feel that way
But that's just me...

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  • 16 years ago

    by PassionCourageTriumph

    Great poem. It was very well written and kept my attention. I hope you and your friend work thing out... Keep up the amazing writing!
    ~Kayla

  • 16 years ago

    by maria

    I really felt it.

  • 16 years ago

    by 4EvErMaKeBeLiEvE

    You shouldn't change yourself for anyone but yourself.

  • 16 years ago

    by Aryaan

    Good one. well penned.

  • 16 years ago

    by Dan

    Beautiful Josh. I am not going in depth as you do but simply beautiful

    -Dan

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