Comments : I Ask You, Darling

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Why did someone downvote this? You certainly do not deserve that....

    "And do your
    fingertips
    taste as
    sweet as
    I have imagined
    all these years?"

    I love this part, simple yet not cliche.

    "I lie in
    fresh rose mountains
    pondering
    such imagery."

    This stanza gives off imagery alone and is so beautiful in its own way. This was a very cute love poem, short but well-penned. Keep up the great work!