WiiSHiiN HE WOULD COME BACK

by STEPHANiiE   Aug 25, 2008


Have you ever caught your self staring into space

thinking about what could have been if you was never replaced

if he never said those words and everything was OK

well i have many of times and i still do

wishing i can go back into time

when his love was all mine

that way i would not hurt no more

and wont have to wish upon a star

every night hoping one day u will be apart of my life

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  • 16 years ago

    by timehealsallwounds6

    You write like i did when ifirst started. but i think its really good, but hears a tip; not all poems have to ryhme. so try thinking of different things that way and see what you come up with. sometimes it can be easier.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    This poem is really cute , but with a few mistakes that if fixed will help out the flow . 4/5

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