Nice poem, but it didn't quite ended like a diamante... shape...although you did captured the essence of HURT very well...
Not my favorite but still a 4/5

**Ada**
*aBSwaBHiaPL*

What was the syllable count that you had to use for this format?
The flow was good and it is straight to the point. 5/5

Diamantes are a interesting form. I thought you did a great job with this, the word choice was good, and the way that the two words were connected was interesting. Great work, I think this is great diamante, maybe provide us with a explanation of what a diamante is so those that don't know.. will know. :]
Great work, you did a fabulous job.
Ooo, painful should have one l not two.

..5/5.

Short but very descriptive. I could defenatly relate to your poem through your use of imagry as well as getting a clear picture of what you ment in my head. The other thing I liked was the rhyming.
Well written

Very well done. the ending isn't a diamond but ohwell. it was overall very good. 5/5 ~KM~

Very well writen here. what a heartbreaking can lead to. all those feeling, all that hurt. your message was more then those few words u wrote. very touching n very sad indeed. what a lot of ppl can relate to. i know i can.

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy