Nice very nice, i especally liked

And ancient landscape
That I wander in search of my past

Ruins looking for rest from the onslaught
The wind and the rain running their influence

it shows so much about the character in thepoem.. the imagry was good along with the choice of words you used, i especally liked onslaught and rain running there influence,, it just sounds so so well i cant even think of the wrd im trying to project but yeah u get the point lol