Comments : Wonder

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Have we shamed,
    His sweet creations,
    With these seeds,
    That make our nations.

    This is my favorite stanza. I enjoyed the whole piece because I ask myself the same questions, but this just stood out for me. I think you did a great job! Good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    An absolutely beautiful poem that was very well-written out. I loved reading this, keep up the great work as always...