What a heartfelt poem my dear, loved & felt every single word.

Is This too much to ask
Feeling hands touch once more
Kisses upon my lips
Filling an empty heart like before

So beautifully ended.
Your heart will be filled again for sure. You are only here to show us the meaning of true love, thank you

all the best and take care

This write is truly beautiful Cindy,What speaks better of a relationship than to wish to repeat the experience. I think there is a reason that we say "until death do us part" because when that person is gone from us we are free to love again without guilt because we have fulfilled that vow.It is a compliment to that person that they taught us about love in such a way that we would want it again. Accept that freedom Cindy , let yourself move on and live life again,he would want that for you.

An excellent write.

So very sad and touching write.. keep it up

Exquisitely sad, tearfully beautiful. So much love locked inside must be so hard to bear.

Touching. It flows well and the rhyming os not forced. Pure, raw emotion to tug at the heartstrings. Good job!

So many emotions flowed your piece, i enjoyed it very much. there's a real sense of longing and it's something many can relate to.

melanie

From start to end this poem speaks of a feeling I once knew..the emptiness especially is a killer. One day that emptiness will be filled..and love will bloom.
Take care

Wow that was breathtaking poetic art. It had me in tears. I can really feel your sadness and I'm sorry for that. Great poem... your a great writer. I'm sorry that it comes from such a great void in your hear though.

Lol my typing mistake that hear is supposed to be heart

I have read this many times and am moved more each time I finish reading. Not only can this apply to a lover or husband, that has passed away, but applies to a love that has been lost from a marriage and the mate who finds someone to give those feelings back to them. I know all to well. Thanks for writing this.

All i want to say is i almost cried it brought back so much feelings to me i came out of a two year relationship n im still at that stage wer im lost n scared all i wna do is run bk into his armsss n im not even askin for much but thats life i guess

beautiful poems keep it up

Cindy how.. this brings my eyes to tears.. ive been reading the clubs poetry its far much more advanced than the one im in.. i havnt commented in any ofthem just because well.. it would seem awkward.. heh.. but i had to comment this.. because.. your words have struck me.. because ... i cant even talk! or type.. ahh Cindy.. you are true beauty with these words your pain.. creates a new realm..but it is up 2 u 2 mke it for what you want it.. 2 be.. imaginaton.. at its best.