Too Far Gone

by End Of Eternity   Aug 26, 2008


There's a candle burning in the name of love
At this point where the dead end starts
Life is just one big circle of emotions
In the end only things bleeding are our hearts

Years of trust won't guarantee true love
Unconditional sacrifices could go invain
Time just an enjoyable game played by God
With two hands that love to embrace pain

Commitment a suicide note from innocent souls
Excuse to satisfy cause of life imprisonment
Compromising circumstances rule our destiny
Pushing fading fate further to its descent

Just kill me or make me filthy rich
Seems like my only prayer these days
I am someone who never used to care
For luxury over love in any of the ways

Embraced tightly in these arms of misery
Empty road won't bring us together anymore
Though I breathe everyday like I used to
Yet this heart of mine is too far gone

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  • 15 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Well done on this, Nitin. makes you wonder where good old things like love have gone; in their place, there seems to be only want.

    great job, as always

    shobhana

  • 15 years ago

    by Ariana

    I really liked this write. The word choice captures emotion and conveys it to the reader really well, with the ending wrapping everything up nicely. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    A beautiful write. stunning. an excellent choice of words, very creative. i enjoyed reading this, it was filled with so many emotions. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 15 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Hi Nitin

    After a long time i read ur poems n i again felt the same vibes i always used to get from your poems. wonderful!
    its really nice to be a part of this site n wonderful poets like u.....5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Excellent write my friend. loved the word usage.

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