The cops were saying that drugs were to blame,
and I had to keep myself from falling down.
Standing there in silence, all I could see,
was the alcohol bottles that they found.

^^ I love this stanza, it was just really honest and it felt very naturally written.

There are some things I didn't like: the rhymes ambulance - distance. It sort of messed up the whole flow.

I really do like the poem, although, the ending seemed a little forced to me. I had expected more feelings, and more than just "i hope this will be put in the past" sort of line.

Overall impression: great poem.

The Angel of Secrets

This whole poem gave me goosebumps. I could feel every little emotion you were feeling as you walked down the sidewalk to see what was going on. I could only imagine the impact that it made on you to actually witness it happening in real life. This was written kind of like a short sad story, but I thought you did a great job with the emotions and portraying a really sad image in my mind of the car accident. Well done. 5/5.

I heard your car speed past my house,
and I wondered what made such a noise.
I saw nothing, just a cloud of dirt and rocks,
but in my head I heard the cries of three boys.

I enjoyed the way you start this as a story with a beginning ,it makes it clear to the reader what is happening.

It's been a few hours, and I can't stop crying,
why did they have to drive too fast?
I can only hope those boys will be okay,
and that this can all be put in the past.

I liked the way you ended this by showing the pure emotions that you felt by witnessing such an event.
The rhymes were good and it flowed well.An excellent job.