Paradise flame

by Kyle Cavanagh   Aug 26, 2008


Deep fears burning,
different places there,
Paradise for some people,
for me it just sears,

burnt hairs,
memories unfinished,
screaming at me,
"your going to be punished",

"were driving you crazy,
slowly and painfully,
Paradise has died,
and you defended it bravely,"

darkness takes-over,
anger kicks in,
separated from Friends,
separated from kin,

burnt it all down,
only ashes remain,
nothing but Grey,
comes... from Paradise... flame,

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mummy to a beautiful baby girl

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  • 16 years ago

    by Frederick Mayer

    There is a near sense of uniqueness in this poet's use of imagery that deftly uses content over merely structure in the importance of its delivery/being. Yet, there is just a fringe between a "4" and a "5" in this fine work. Have no doubt about about it, however, the work's creator is a "Poet" and the presented material is given with such fine aplomb that for any willing to experience it will find it extrenely worth their while to do so!

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