I dont think the title suit with the poem. Speed would be great if it was the title.

The comma after every line is not a must. The first letter of each opening line in every stanza should be capitalized. I prefer each first letter of every line to be capitalized as it add a pleasing appearance to the poem. The apostrophe was missing in the word THAT’S. I dont think it is good for a poem to be ended up by a comma.

However lets go to the flow and structure of the poem. The flow was flawless that made it easy to read. The structure was excellent. You managed to focus on the image your poem was trying to portray. Excellent job..5/5

Stuff tat [person i <3d it kyle.

Wow mazing i thouth u did really well 5/5
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