Dark Wishes

by Mister 47   Aug 26, 2008


It is time, hold my pen down and rest
Time to take your picture, and put it on my chest
Time is no longer a measure in my mind
Just wondering between memories I can find

Open my eyes to darkness around me to embrace it
And on my silly joyful thought I had, I spit
I want to be lost in the leisure of my thoughts
I want to run away from you all and never be caught

I want to wish upon a star, all the dark wishes I want
A dream is a wish you heart write in large font
I want to read all the dark spells in the book of shadows
And imagine myself hanging in the gallows

I am a dark lighter in the perfect dark time
I am a poet with no passion, no structure and no rhyme
I am the cactus in the garden of roses
I am the creator of sadness and the cause

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  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Wow. CJ, that was a different sort of write from you, it was very good and i liked the structure a lot.

    Open my eyes to darkness around me to embraces it
    ^^ Should be: Open my eyes to darkness around me to embrace it. No s on the end of embrace.
    I am a poet with no passion, no structure and no rhyme
    ^^ i couldnt disagree more. You are a poet with fantastic structure and rhyme is your fortay. Stay positive CJ, if you think highly of yourself, you are giving other people reasons to think highly of you.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Wow.. this was very dark. i loved it! lol 5/5
    **harlea ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Frederick Mayer

    This poet seems to deftly use "I" in their poetic excursions and does it in a way that nearly sing to the works receiver as it plays the fibres of their being. It maintains a set atmospher and continuous sense of "enjoyment" that make it well worth the experience! I couldn't quite give it a "5" as there seems subjectively to me something missing.

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