So sad.......
very well written..very emotional..

=[ awe its a nice poem, but sucks 2 have a short lived life

fav part: "Staring into its cold dark gaze.

As it stares into mine." << that painted a nice picture into my head. cool

another good write!

~tia

Wow it's so sad and good. :-(

WOW I LOVED TIS POEM
i have put it on my fav poem list
you can feel the darkness in the poem
you are an amazing poet
keep it up
cant wait to read more

This kind of sounds like a suicide note. N=But I know it is way deeper than that. great job

You shouldn't think like thaat life is long

I liked this.
You put alot of emotion
into this.Hint hint KEY!!!again:D
Lol but no you are such a great
writer.Keep your day job:D
-Kortney

Another great poem. i'm really enojoying your work. great poem and i love your style. keep it up. Shanik

Great blank verse very well thought out 5/5 also great job on putting emotion into it not many people can now a days sadly

WOW amazing i loved it

keep up the amazing work

So emotional dude. keep it up. :]

Alive yet dead within, it's a very catchy poem and so sad and emotional. I loved it. 5/5 :)

Bri~

Another yet beautiful, emotional and very touching poem. Once again i felt this very deep inside. Love the vividness and the darkness to it.
keep it up.

victoria