Good poem I love it keep up the good work

Wow this was so so powerful. there are always guys in life who will hurt us but there is always that special someone who will always be there to pick us up after we fall down. this was such an amazing poem. great job,

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That was good. I hope you don't mind if I helped you change the wording to make it wrime just right. Change it to ...along with my heart you tore me slowly appart. I must say aswell, that your name is very creative. Can't wait to read more of your poetry!:)

I know that i have already commented on this poem but anyway i just decided to come and read over all your poems and this one just grows on me more and more each time i read it, it is amazing, the way in which you express your emotions is so powerful and i find i can really relate to it. like you said, everything happens for a reason!!! just hang in there and you'll see. things will get better. take care hun, **Hugs**