Such a strong write keep it up. i really liked the the lines

"Why don't you blame yourself for all that goes wrong
Ask yourself how it is possible to still hold on"

"Why don't you see your life for what it is; one big lie
Hate yourself so much that you wish that you could die
Doubted everything you say, not knowing if something was true
As I did when I realized that I was stupid enough to believe you"

i'm not sure why but those lines were very strong to me. over all i liked your whole poem it was extreamly good. 5/5

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