by andhereIstand Aug 26, 2008
category :
Life, society /
about society
Soft kisses |
by MyMuse
This was awesome O.O it was very like WOW!!! Like it painted a VIVID picture in my head...and i love those kind of poems really =] so good job on this!! I felt like i was reading a book with this cool plot =] |
by x Mo x
Second stanza, third line, "together" is spelled wrong. |
REALLY GOOD IT WAS VERY DEEP AND FILLED WITH EMOTION I TOOK IT AS TWO PEOPLE LOVING THEM BUT SOCIETY IS KEEPING THEM APART |
Wow your poem paints a very deep picture, I like it. |