Absolutly beautiful! I really loved the flow this piece gave off. It is strong and ellegant. That is what I look for in a poem. I really enjoyed how so many poeple can relate to this horrid feeling. It sends out a message that people who feel this way are not alone. It was very well put together and it gives off a great vibe. Excellent write my dear:)

5/5

That went through me...Although ur poem wz no rhymes,It's like it has inner rhythms...
Somehow it was like a very sad song..

I walk on broken glass
The blood pours out
Despite the pain
I feel a relief, I am running from myself
Trying to escape my life of hell.

This is my favorite part bcoz it really showed how u suffer inside like who walks on broken glass...u r bleeding and Although it's so obvious,u are still invisible..

So now I scream my heart out
And leave this life
For tonight is the night that
I end my life...

This made my heart feel so much pain inside...U know sometimes we think that committing suicide would end our pain and suffering but as u said,it's just escape...
So be strong and try to face urslf and get rid of ur weakness..
Good job,keep it up:)..