Comments : Footsteps

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This is such a well written poem..
    I love the repetition and also the message.
    You did an outstanding job on this poem!
    Keep writing always:)

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Ps: I nominated you too:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Too many I's and other filler words. You shouldn't begin a line with and.....I do think it was clever and I enjoyed the repetition of My footsteps led back to you in every other stanza. You could be a little more creative throughout the piece with your word choice. A decent job though.....