Lovely Passion

by EmoKitten   Aug 27, 2008


A girl seeking for a guy's touch
A guy trying to find a special girl
Searching each other over years,
seems like a million of times have passed
Endlessly searching for the other right half
Finally found but yet still too blind to notice that the other half was found.
Found but unnoticed
Misunderstanding but wanting each other
Two persons starting to fall...
To fall in love.. with the other one
Is it the right one? Could it really be?.. Did this really happen or is it just a dream?
My fantasy maybe?
Am I in heaven, what happened... , did i die?
Did I start to get crazy? This can't happen to me, not to the one who was searching for so long... It shouldn't have happened, not to me
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okay here we go.. i re-wrote it today. The person, who i wrote this poem for (kinda..) told me it had at least a better ending that the one above so here check it out :) thanks
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A girl seeking for a guy's touch
A guy trying to find a special girl
Searching each other over years
Seems like a million time has passed

Endlessly searching for the other right half
Finally found

But yet still too blind to notice the other half was already found
Found but unnoticed
Not knowing how to explain

Two persons starting to fall...
Falling in love with each other

Is this just a dream?

Could it be, I finally found what I was searching for so long?

Maybe its just my fantasy again?
Seems like I am in heaven

Suffering in Heaven with all this pain in my broken heart

It can't be real

I wished it was, but it is not...

Is it?

=3 i did not didn't is better, i was just trying to give my best and huh shh a few lines especially the ending.. i hope you like it !

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  • 16 years ago

    by EmoKitten

    Lol..i forgot i could replay with this too xD

  • 16 years ago

    by angelsufferingonearth

    Beautiful, thank you. Could be my lines...

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