Comments : TwinFlame

  • 15 years ago

    by H E Losey

    A bit confusing, to me at least.
    I could never find your metre/rhythm nor was the rhyme scheme consistent in this write.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ravi

    U have nicely explained the colours and linked them with traits of Sun.
    Try to edit further.

  • 15 years ago

    by trippetta TC

    Lovely content to the context of chakras, and mystery divine, keep searching, but make your meaning accesible (though I got the gist completly)