Comments : Stay Gone

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I can totally relate to this poem.

    I believe that breaking off a loving relationship is possibly one of the most difficult things to do. If you still have a good friendship, trying to define a friends only relationship is so difficult to acheive. If you break up and their is no other person envolved, you only have will power to fall back onto and it can be so lonely, the sweet memory of loving caresses constantly tease you, trying to break your will. At night you toss and turn and tears flow as you close your eyes in your empty bed, alone and without your best friend and lover.

    Well done for writing about this.

    Michael

  • 16 years ago

    by justl0veme

    I lUv tHiS PoeM...iM Goiin ThRu dA samE ThInG.......