Hmm its my honor as one of the first commentor of this poet. actually i enjoyed every 's and words u had written in here, it such has a powerful message that we can totally keep in our mind and in our hearts that saying this is really true. yeah i believe this lines and it really touches my heart

All my sons and daughters.
I was always there
Listening to your
Messages
I never abandoned you
Even after you
Abandoned me."

it really has a great dedication to everyone! i love this kind of poetry very inspiring so i give it 5/5 keep it up and keep on writing all what u feel

I really enjoyed the moral of this poem. You have a very distinctive structure with your poetry, which I grow to like, as it aids the flow. 5/5