Comments : Lost but still here

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a sad piece you have penned here.

    Death has no meaning
    You belong here.
    The last words uttered
    made me shed tears.
    Ashes to ashes dust to
    dust, I loved you I loved
    once and once only so cold
    to the grave.

    This stanza really touched my heart. How many times I have uttered those same feelings. Losing the love of your life is the most painful thing to endure. You did a great job.
    Take Care
    Cindy