by Rachel RTVW Aug 28, 2008
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Shadows fall upon us all |
by Rachel
Trully amazing. Really. I found myself pause half way through and say out loud.. WOW. n then said it at the end too.. Then read it again. hah. It really is so good! Well done! Write more! |
by Sylvia
As I read this, I could actually feel and see these changes around me. Your poem describes the area where I live as if you had lived here before and experienced our change of seasons. A real pleasure to read. |
by SADADDY
You have painted a picture in the readers mind with the words you have expressed so well. Thank you for sharing it with us. May peace and joy fill your heart each and everyday. |
Beautifully written you paint a lovely picture of the change of seasons , well done |
Well done. Nice images |