Rachel
This is such a beautiful piece. The imagery is awesome. You have painted such a beautiful picture with your words. I can see the entire scene in my mind.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Rachel,this is an excellent write,The imagery really does come to life. Your rhymes are perfect as always.Beautiful!

Trees will bare their all to you
As nature marches on

Mindblowing is all i could say. Awesome imagination and great usage of words.

Limited words yet so expressive, great poem indeed

all the best and take care

Wow looks like that was written in the best of mood by the author.. Keep writing

That was masterful. I added that to my favorites.

Well done. Nice images

Beautifully written you paint a lovely picture of the change of seasons , well done

Grant

You have painted a picture in the readers mind with the words you have expressed so well. Thank you for sharing it with us. May peace and joy fill your heart each and everyday.

Sadaddy

As I read this, I could actually feel and see these changes around me. Your poem describes the area where I live as if you had lived here before and experienced our change of seasons. A real pleasure to read.

Trully amazing. Really. I found myself pause half way through and say out loud.. WOW. n then said it at the end too.. Then read it again. hah. It really is so good! Well done! Write more!