Metaphoric Whirlwind

Very nice. although the word chewable didn't make the poem end so nicely, in my opinion. It contrasts to much with words like pellucid and ravenous.

Oh my yes....I knew someone like this, and I even had to stop saying her name out loud
because it seemed as though, every time I did, she appeared at the door, or called on the phone, usually within an hour...
Once I stopped mentioning her by name, she stopped materializing....it was quite amazing...

Excellent word choice! A cleverly written piece. Unique and well worth the read!

Your words portray strong feelings and it paints a vivid picture in my mind..excellent write. Take care

Oh, I do so love your use of words and the dripping venom in this one! Well done indeed Melissa