Do you remember me?

The way you write is different. It's not bad, but could be better. You have a lot of potential as a writer and this poem shows that. I really liked this poem. It had a good flow and tons of emotion.

5/5

Keep it up!

I like the words you used. I could picture everything while I was reading. bravo:)

This was really sad! I thought some of your lines were a little too short, but they don't take away from the poem. It was very emotional. I loved it.

"When the heart cant stand alone
It feels so sad
When theres no beat
Theres no happiness
When your not here
This life no more ecstasy"

I absolutely adore this stanza =P. Its so emotional, and true. Its something i can relate to. and thats hard to do.

Keep it up! 5/5!
Dollface.

I think most of us can relate to the pain you feel and to the position that you're in, I know I can. It's always tough to be alone, especially without the one you love. We just have to stay strong and pray it gets better with time, even though it doesn't always :( amazing job 5/5 GG23