Two souls, One heart

by Lucifer   Aug 28, 2008


We are here for the last time as we stare at the ground which will divide our lives
The full moon fades as the beginning of our new day blinds our eyes.

Always hiding our silent tears as we get closer to a brighter day
And every step will tear us even farer away.

Once again I pray my shadow will help hide my lies,
Tears fill our eyes as were forced to say our final goodbyes.

Your skin is now so cold and pale, yet much more like the angel from that age old tale.

The heavens open as drops run down my face, watching you lower seeing you lay there in all your grace.

Years of pain still haunt us all forevermore, an inescapable pain that shall haunt us until we are given the call.

The oceans shall collide seperating us all, binding us apart until its our time to fall.

The darkness inside us all digs deeper with each day but somewhere out there is love to complete every soul.

We all have a reason to live, to laugh and to love,
Our souls all hold a place in the universe.

Our dreams shall never die, shining ever brighter over the hills every night.

I promise you, my love, your memories and thoughts shall never fade for they shall live with me forever as I carry on for both our souls.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Biancas Veil

    I loved reading this the emotion that you detail is strong and it's so tender and loving its beautiful great work

  • 13 years ago

    by kimara4955

    And you tell me your no good at writing this is beautiful, i loved every line of it, you'll always be my closet poet, hehe, don't stop writing, your amazing. 5/5 <fantastic, love you xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    I really did enjoy reading this . The flow and the rhyming were fantastically written , and it also pourred with emotion . Well done , 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cara

    Wow this a fantastic poem. i really did enjoy it, and it kept me wanting to read it. very well done. i loved every stanza.
    the sadness and intensity of the poem came through in every line, so the flow was good.
    i would even go as far as saying that this is one of my favourite poems.
    well done.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    The oceans shall collide seperating us all, binding us apart until it�¢ï¿½ï¿½s our time to fall.
    ^^ It should be separating and I recommend you to re-edit your poems for these boxes to go.

    The darkness inside us all digs deeper with each day but somewhere out there is love to complete every soul.
    ^^ I think there should be comma between all and digs

    Our dreams shall never die, shining ever brighter over the hills every night.
    ^^ A very powerful and descriptive idea was shown here.

    I promise you, my love, your memories and thoughts shall never fade for they shall live with me forever as I carry on for both our souls.
    ^^ A truly heartfelt words and commitment you have emphasized here. I admired the dedication you have for that person. It was strongly revealed in this piece. Good Job..

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