It didint last

by jasmine cherry   Aug 28, 2008


Love withers away
And reveals a gaping hole in your heart
It trembles with every weak breathe
You and he used to be one
He used to fill that aching hole in your heart
But life is uncensored and things can break this unity
When you realized then it's too late
The damage has already been done

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  • 16 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    I liked this poem alot, but i thought it couldve been a bit longer, because it was a good write. I think it flowed really well, but your wording [to me] was slightly off. But apart from that i thought this was an awesome poem. i really liked it. 4/5 keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by liiz

    Its ok a little bit more details would be better

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