The Bite Of A Vampire

by Yeka   Aug 28, 2008


Bleeding
Weak
That's what I feel
Cold
Frighten
That's What happening
Not able to break free
Unable to scream
Unable to call for help
Choosing this faith
A faith of a pain full death
Leaving everything behind
Closing your eyes so gently
Hearing someone
Smell of a fresh blood
Drinking it
Seeing someone giving you there blood
To live and to be a Vampire
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Years Pass
Seeing a guy
Walking to wards the street
A car honk
Speed that you push him safely with him
eye to eye
Having a gut feeling
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To Be Continue

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fluffy

    Love it...its a love vapire story it sounds like it keep it up....fluffy

  • 16 years ago

    by Katelyn McLaughlin

    Hi thanks fr the comment:) i like where this is going i think it has great potential and i cant wait for its finish the only thing i think needs work is your cadence like in my older work as always when i look back i see my flaws so keep up the good work and try picking a rhythm for your poems think of it perhaps like a song :)

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