Comments : The Bite Of A Vampire

  • 16 years ago

    by Katelyn McLaughlin

    Hi thanks fr the comment:) i like where this is going i think it has great potential and i cant wait for its finish the only thing i think needs work is your cadence like in my older work as always when i look back i see my flaws so keep up the good work and try picking a rhythm for your poems think of it perhaps like a song :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Fluffy

    Love it...its a love vapire story it sounds like it keep it up....fluffy