Hi thanks fr the comment:) i like where this is going i think it has great potential and i cant wait for its finish the only thing i think needs work is your cadence like in my older work as always when i look back i see my flaws so keep up the good work and try picking a rhythm for your poems think of it perhaps like a song :) |
by Fluffy
Love it...its a love vapire story it sounds like it keep it up....fluffy |