Finally
by Still On My Journey Aug 28, 2008
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My whole life i felt worthless, like a disappointment. I spent 7 years of my life life living to your standards. To what you wanted out of me. I have lived in secrecy for 3 years now cant tell you this , shouldn't say that. I spent my life called out of my name , judge, feeling that I don't belong. I've been inferior of being who I wanted. You know way I'm tired of being a disappointment in your eyes.YES! I have been making some bad choices. But now I'm making better ones for me not anyone else. I cant look down on me because you are. No I'm not I'm going to change on my own. You don't like me you know what I don't care you never did no matter what you deny it.Finally I'm living for me, and when I make it I did on my own, with out your help. Finally I realized who I want to be, and no matter what you say I'm going to make it with or with out you. |
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16 years ago
You need to write this out properly. What you have here is good, firm, positive content that might just inspire other people in your situation and age group. But how it's written right now is just a clutter.
Don't take this as a bad criticism. Other experienced poets on this site will tell you the same thing. The potential is there. You can make this great. :-)
